This tune is childishly aggressive since it's about a place my friends would go to as kids. It was by a highway viaduct and some train tracks. A mini forest with bike paths that kids had carved out through heavy usage. We called it "The Savageland" because we could go wild there and nobody ever bothered us:
Here's a pretty raw experiment with some layered guitars. The intro's too long. It took me a while to get going. I'm not sure if it lends itself to lyrics or not. Maybe you'll find something there: